Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Stuck on this one too!

Hey guys, this is another story I've been working on but I'm stuck on the last part. I'm not sure how to get her from the bedroom to the dining hall. Should I add plot in between or should I just skip there? Let me know what you think!


Sweet music fills the air, lofty notes flitting through the airy rooms and halls of the glorious marble castle, entrancing all who was in earshot into a relaxed and contented mood. The tropical birds outside the palace joined in the song, singing sweetly like a chorus to the melodies of the harp that played in the spacious throne room. Philyra, the youngest princess of the Aerial Isles, plucked at the strings of her harp, gliding her small fingers gingerly across the strings in a meditative trance, forming notes into chords, and chords into a melody that expressed the peace in her heart. Her long brown hair and pink flowing dress waved with the wind blowing through the open arches of the hall, her soft brown eyes drifting dreamily from string to string.  The sunlight from the skylights fell on her white skin through the canopy of tropical leaves. She loved the feeling of peace she got from this room. The architecture worked with the trees and the animals, taking in the feeling of tranquility that possessed the island.
The Aerial Isles are peaceful in themselves. They are home to animals and plants that live in harmony with the Aerians. Working together, the animals help the humans to find prey in exchange for shelter and companionship. Plants provide fruits and wood for easy harvesting in exchange for maintenance by the humans. The weather is always pleasant. Light showers in the mornings and sunlight in the afternoons, making rainbows the sign of noon. The surrounding waves never went too high, but were strong enough to bring in fish for food. The people of Aerial were just as friendly as the islands themselves. They each do their share of work, keep themselves as healthy as the islands, and make themselves agreeable to the other inhabitants to the islands.
The Aerial Isles became this way hundreds of years ago, during the rule of Queen Alexandra. They were constantly under siege by pirates and powerful nations looking to add the string of tropical islands to their empires like an exotic emerald necklace to an overflowing jewelry box. However, Queen Alexandria had an extraordinary gift. She could negotiate with the king of the beasts and the spirit of the trees. How she could do this, no one knew, for she would bar any other human to join in the conferences between her and the mysterious creatures. Together, they united to defeat all of the enemies of the isles, soldier mounting jaguar, sailor riding sharks, trees and shrubs growing into impossible mazes for the invaders to navigate, and reefs growing into ship sinkers. Eventually, the Aerial Isles no longer had enemies or empires looking to take their riches. With time the Aerians faded into legend, a paradise never to be seen, a civilization never to be contacted. The Aerial Isles became peaceful, but a military was maintained in the event of an attack.
Philyra meditated on this history, grateful to Alexandra and her gifts that allowed her to pursue her love of music instead of hiding in fear of the outside world. A loud clang and a roar echoed from the corridor leading from the throne room to the training arena. Philyra’s older sisters filed into the throne room on their mounts. Medea, the oldest and Crown Princess, rode in on her albino jaguar mount followed by her five other sisters: Iris, Larissa, Sophelia, Zenia, and Diana. “Sister dear, care to join us for lunch? I hear the chef has prepared something special in honor of father’s birthday.” Medea smiled as she extended her hand as an invitation to join her on her mount.
“Of course I will! I’m sure father will be excited to see us all for dinner for once!” Usually each sister was left to her own devices, training, eating, sleeping, learning, and diverting themselves on their own schedules. However, since today is a special day, they all thought it would be best to spend time with their father. Philyra took her sister’s hand and was swung up onto the back of the jaguar. The sisters brought their mounts to a trot and were at the dining hall within minutes. “Do you think he’s excited for the feast tonight?” Philyra asked Medea.
“I don’t know. Father’s never been one for parties so I guess not, but we can hope he’ll at least have fun.” Philyra nodded at this, remembering how her father would avoid parties and festivities as much as he could. He would open and close them but never attend, unless of course one of his daughters was performing. Each of them had their talents, Medea was the best fighter, Sophelia was the best singer, Iris was the best painter, Zenia was the best horseman, Diana was the best archer, and Philyra was the best musician. However, unlike her sisters, Philyra did not engage in military affairs, as she was too small and weak to even hold a shield.
Her thoughts were broken as they entered the room and saw their father at the head of the table being served his lunch. “Happy Birthday Father!” they yelled in unison. They all rushed over to the tall man in shining silver armor sitting at the table. Before he got swarmed by his daughters, he gathered them all up into one big hug, forcing giggles and squeals from them. Throughout lunch the girls chattered excitedly over the evening’s celebrations. Once they finished, they each went to their separate rooms to prepare for the party. Philyra went to her room and dressed in her best dress, a white lace gown that fit her just right. She put her hair up in gold strappings and white flowers.

When she was finished, she sat down to play the ivory harp kept in her room. Again she lost herself in the music, thinking of the comfortable stillness she loved so much. The glow of the sun dimmed as she played, hours passed and it was night. She was still playing when the trumpet blared and shook her from her stupor. 

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